The Official Writing Challenge
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04/27/06
Interesting and kept my attention. Not sure if it quite rang true. I certainly wouldn't start challenging someone about the morality of their life if my child's life was hanging in the balance... oh, and didn't like the blasphemy half way through, think it was unnecessary. But the piece has a lot going for it.
04/29/06
You did a great job of establishing distinct personalities of the two men. I'm not clear on why he's asking for the prayers of someone without faith. Really nice touch with all-dialog; that's not easy to do.