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I loved this line "I took the treasure chest and poured the remains around the flower garden and watched them grow in beautiful arrays of golden rods, marigolds and daisies." I loveed how it related so profoundly to your mother's passing and the legacy she left behind. beautiful story!
Oh, I remember winter days like that! Just a few quick edits for spelling and punctuation, and this piece will be a shivery delight.
You captured some of the simple delights of childhood in this piece. Oh, and good message, too!