The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/06
Very nice. Wonderful truth well expressed.
03/03/06
This is very good! The rhyme and meter were both spot on...the only suggestion I'd have is that it covers really familiar territory--a twist of some sort would make it stand out in the crowd.
03/03/06
Always nice to read a structured poem where the rhyme and rhythm and content all work together without clashing.
03/03/06
I love the flow and this type of poetry! Good job.
Very nice. Good rhyme scheme and meter.
03/05/06
This was great -so much packed into so few words!