The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/06
I like the way you broke down the scripture into small chunks, and gave practical applications for each bit. One grammar note: "saw a need" instead of "seen a need." A worthy lesson!
Wow, very well-written! Could be used as a inspiring devotional. This was so straight from the heart!
03/05/06
A good article, although you start with "2005 has had a lot trials" not sure if this was written awhile ago or currently. I am also confused about the Peter and John reference with the other scriptures, are you applying those scriptures to what Peter and John did? I don't think it's necessary, but it's not my article, good job.