The Official Writing Challenge
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Try to avoid references to the topic word as a word--and avoid definitions. There's a reason people don't read dictionaries! It's better to just share your insights, and use the topic more naturally, as it unfolds in your storytelling. You've got some great insights here--thanks for sharing them.
I only read the first three lines and I must confess I did not finish. It was very hard to read no breaks (paragraphs my friend). I am your audience so you want to capture my attention and make it comfortable to read.