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A very easy-to-read, common sense piece; and very enlightening! Just a few minor edits, like adding an "ed" to shelter, and making an "as" instead of an "a"...but overall - very niely done...and so true! God Bless.
I agree with Marilyn. This is a good message for us all. Sometimes we do make excuses for sins that we consider minor until they grow into larger and larger ones. Thanks for sharing.
A very good message on a tough topic. A few VERY minor typos, but a solid piece.
I liked the message of this piece - especially the point about our tendency to condemn ourselves rather than the sin. When we go out into the neighborhoods in our area to talk to people about God, the number one reason we get from people who say they believe in God and Jesus for not accepting Him into their lives is that they do too much wrong in their life. They always want to clean things up before they come to God, instead of coming to him first and letting him do the cleansing. As you say, the devil is very tricky.