The Official Writing Challenge
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What a great story. I loved the new way to evangelize, along with the reminder of the greatness of Jesus.
A good evangelistic method. Thank you for the enthusiasm of these precious young people for their love for Jesus. :-)
This is a fascinating story. You have a couple spots where I wasn't sure who was speaking, but I enjoyed the dialog. Tighten it up some, add double spaces between the paragraphs and you'll have an even stronger piece. You did a great job of writing on topic while delivering a powerful message. Congratulations for placing 1st in your level and 3rd overall. The winners are posted on the message boards.