The Official Writing Challenge
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Quite touching.It is a pity that you did not give us two personal thoughts of his to bring out his character.
Thank you for sharing your struggle. We would all hope to respond in such a faith-filled way. Inspiring.
This piece is excellent and written as it should be. With a short piece, it is generally best to stick to one POV. The author wrote it from her POV, and therefore could only show her thoughts not those of another person.

Congratulations, Linda, on placing 7th in Editor's Choice. A well deserved win.
03/29/22
Thank you for letting us into your sacred space of suffering in such an honest, uplifting way. Your writing is very clear and genuine.