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Beautifully written. I hope this places :)
This is a powerful story. You do a fine job of showing depression and despair. I like how it mirrored what happened in the Bible. Be careful about subtle POV shifts. You did a nice job of writing on topic and delivering a clear message.
You summed up God's purpose and perfect timing, changing a life in a moment of time.

In real life circumstances, it's when Holy Spirit prompts and we obey, becoming Gladys's to our neighbor, that His providential, magnificent love is displayed.

Well written example of His mysterious moves.
Elijah's experience under the Juniper tree aptly illustrates the topic. I was immediately drawn into the narrative with your opening sentence. Great beginning. Remember to be consistent with verb tenses within a sentence.
Ex. "Elsie is not really listening until they COME..."

Excellent application of a biblical story that points to God's faithfulness when we are weak.