The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/21
I really enjoyed this writing. You are very descriptive. I also thoroughly enjoyed how you tied in salvation. I thoroughly enjoyed this!The paragraph that starts "As I turned to walk back..." left me questioning that sentence. I found myself wanting to put a period after villa. Other than that, I found this a most enjoyable writing.
05/25/21
Beautiful! Well done and well written.
Blessings~
This is quite lovely. You have vivid descriptions and transition from the beach to the Bible nicely. It reminded me of something I do in the summer as I walk in the night. I see the airplanes above me, aware of the people on board and pray for each person. The next time I go to the beach, I'll pray for the person who left the footprints.
05/26/21
Well done!

I really enjoyed the way you artfully crafted your entry and wove in one of my favorite scriptures, 'How beautiful are the feet...'

05/26/21
Well done!

I really enjoyed the way you artfully crafted your entry and wove in one of my favorite scriptures, 'How beautiful are the feet...'

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