The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely fresh devotional. Your use of metaphor held my interest and kept it from being a dry list of Scripture passages and predictable commentary.
05/07/21
Well written! A fresh take on the word challenge. In one paragraph, you have Johns - it needs to read John's. I enjoyed this piece.
05/09/21
Now I know something about Manatee's, thank you. A great article. I also belief God's Word (and rain water) is Living water, always fresh. Keep on sharing.
I thoroughly enjoyed this. You pulled me in right away. I've been blessed to see a few manatee in the wild and it's an awesome sight. You did a nice job of reflecting on the situation and using it as a lesson in your own life.
05/13/21
I liked this a lot. For the most part the story flowed. It had a great message as well. My only red ink would be possibly shortening the facts paragraph a little. Good job. Keep writing
05/14/21
Such an enjoyable read and a brilliant tying of the topic with a Truth.

Well done! I think you probably did really well, I haven't had a chance to see the winners yet...