The Official Writing Challenge
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He is in control at all times. Thanks for sharing with us.

I'm a firm believer in God assisting us at all times, especially when we are driving! I have noticed that delays (flat tire, etc.) can prevent us from having far more serious consequences "down the road." Thank you for sharing!
I think every driver relates to the temptation to speed. Saying the van's speed was limited, instead of the driver's, caused me to stumble reading that line.
A little rework here would help the reader. I liked the conclusion inferring the driver is now a believer. Have fun with your next submission.