The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved your story. I remember well those same struggles with my loved one.
Devoted content. Well written and thank you for sharing.
Well written. It brought tears to my eyes as she gave her daddy permission to let go and it reminded me of doing the exact same thing with my own dad. Thank you for sharin.
Congratulations on your first place win in your division and third place overall! This was a lovely piece, so heartfelt. I might be mistaken, but with this win I think you now move up to the Advanced level and will be entering your pieces from that level.
Congratulations! A very beautiful story and well written.
Congratulations, Carolyn, on your 3rd place EC for this authentically captured experience that has been lived by so many of us.
Wow, Carolyn! Well done. God has gifted you, keep writing! Loved this!!
Thank you all for your very kind comments. This was about time with my daddy in his last few days. He's been in heaven 3 years now. I miss him dearly.
Congratulations on your third-place win! I'm new at critiquing. I found your story to be very moving and realistic and I suspect one would have to go through something like your story read to get the emotion that came across in it. It kept my attention from beginning to end.