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01/14/21
A good devotional on topic. You might consider omitting the next to last paragraph--since David isn't actually the one being quoted. I think the devotional works better without that paragraph anyway.
01/15/21
You enjoy your writing style and you maintained my interest to the end :)

The only improvements I can see is I think there might be a typo in this sentence:

An angry God smoke Israel.

Also, I would separate the below sentence from the paragraph you have attached it to so it stands out more

"Considering the world around us today and the pestilence that is prevailing, these words sound prophetic. Maybe we are guilty of the same reasons as in David's day."
I enjoyed reading this piece. It would make an excellent Bible study for a group discussion. You do a great job of sharing your opinion, quoting Scripture, and making the reader stop and think. Three great attributes of a good writer.