The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely and engaging conversation to listen in on.

One thing you can do is read it out loud to make sure the language is age appropriate.

I'm not sure how old the little girl is but it seemed weird for her to say "I feel distant from God"

I thought the opening question was more authentic.

Thanks for sharing

Blessings and Gratitude
Cute peek into a child's viewpoint.