The Official Writing Challenge
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A good lesson here to share.
I would have loved to have traveled that path with you throughs storytelling - feeling what you felt, watching your daily choices add up to the loss. In essence Show don't Tell
It would be nice if you separated your paragraphs too.
Thanks for sharing you experience - Well done

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