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08/06/20
This is a beautiful narrative. It could use some editing though, especially punctuation marks. Well-done!
08/06/20
This is a beautiful narrative. It could use some editing though, especially punctuation marks. Well-done!
Great job on telling your story. I'm so sorry that happened to you, and in a church, of all places. I'm glad you were able to overcome the other person's behavior and remember the reason you were there.
I do not know if this article is fiction or non-fiction and if the narrator is male or female.
However, perhaps the lady in question had a fear of strangers, and felt uncomfortable having to pass an item on from female to a male person, as this is not allowed in some cultures and believes (I am not sure if it has changed in the last few years). It could be the reason she exchanged seats with her Indian husband. However, thank you for sharing.
08/09/20
So sorry for the main character! The ending made me happier! Thanks for telling.