The Official Writing Challenge
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what a spell-binding story... I sort of guessed who your visitor was. I have all kinds of questions outside the frame of what you revealed. Excellent story!
Very well done, but feels a little unfinished.
Is he an angel? If this piece is about hospitality, then the host has been a real gentleman.
Very convicting piece! Loved how you ended it with a ?! Oh my, it's got my mind a buzzing this morning! It was very thought-provoking! How we miss HIM..... in so many areas of our lives... We have to see HIM with the eyes of our soul. Wow! I'm going to be thinking about this story all day. I'm so thankful the LORD let me read it today. Thanks for writing it!