The Official Writing Challenge
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07/16/20
I felt the MC's pain as you did a good job describing it here. Well done, and wonderful message in wrap up.
Blessings~
07/17/20
I like the content and the message. It would have been easier reading if you left a space between paragraphs.
I've had both hips replaced and it's great. You'll wonder why you waited so long!

This would have been easier to read had you put spaces between the paragraphs.
I'm not sure if this is fiction or not. If not, you still have much to give pertaining to your education regarding autistic children, God will guide you. Thank you.
07/21/20
Life can sure throw some kinks into our plans. You detail your path to surrender so well. If this is your story, I pray your recovery exceeds all expectations. God will place you in just the right place. Great writing, whether fiction or non-fiction.