The Official Writing Challenge
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I thought your article was good, but I believe it needed to be proof read. Keep writing. Blessings!
I relate to your frustration. Find someone to help you edit. I find reading out loud helps me find a better flow.
Enjoyed article.
I agree with the other reviews to have someone help you proof read for spelling and grammar issues.
Keep writing!
I agree, waiting can bring impatience!
Take a little time to think out your message. Start with a strong hook and finish with a punch. There are plenty of opportunities to pull the reader into this story. Put emotion into the long waits. Get the reader engaged! Keep writing!