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Yes, I can dig it! But for me, it was Far out! I grew up in California during the early 1970s Jesus Freak era. And proud of it!
You made me smile. I think you have a delightful sense of humor. I'm not a big fan of starting a story with a question to the reader. It feels too much like a school essay to me. You did nail the topic in a fun and fresh way and included a good message at the end.
Real groovy man. I'm hip to your lingo. Lol. You did a very nice job on the topic and I also enjoyed the trip down memory lane. Thanks for sharing.
This was a fun read, very good use of descriptive language pulling us into the setting of your memories! I like the ending too and the reference to the name of Jesus, good job!