The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/20
Growing up in a military family must have been difficult.

You may want to start out with the story about you and your friend sleeping in a cardboard box. This lets the reader get more involved in the story.
Great testimony!
Indeed a great testimony. Keep writing
I like your last two paragraphs...so true..what would Jesus do?
I would have liked to have read one or two more conversations, perhaps one with a stranger on the street who was kind to you, and another with a person at a church who helped you.