The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/20
I have slipped on black ice before. Fortunately, I didn't break any bones. Clever title.

I would leave off the first few sentences and jump right into the story.
05/09/20
Oh, wow, what an experience! Glad you have healed well. I think where you wrote ‘chin’, you must have meant ‘shin’. Keep sharing.
05/09/20
Wow, what a story! I've had two hip replacements, so falling is my worse fear. I'm glad I don't leave where black ice forms!