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A good piece. Edit again before submitting. Keep writing.
05/01/20
Yes, what Jesus did for us on the cross is priceless. Great way to tell it.
Absolutely worth more than any amount of money!
This is a powerful testimony. I think most people dream of unlimited money at some point. You do a nice job by relating to most people. I feel like you might have missed the topic a bit, but this week was a difficult topic in my opinion. Personally I'm not a big fan of starting out with a question for the reader, but with some tweaking, this could make a great Bible study with some questions like that at the end for a discussion. Your message is clear and I can feel your passion to spread the love of Jesus in your words.