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A good piece. Edit again before submitting. Keep writing.
Yes, what Jesus did for us on the cross is priceless. Great way to tell it.
Absolutely worth more than any amount of money!
This is a powerful testimony. I think most people dream of unlimited money at some point. You do a nice job by relating to most people. I feel like you might have missed the topic a bit, but this week was a difficult topic in my opinion. Personally I'm not a big fan of starting out with a question for the reader, but with some tweaking, this could make a great Bible study with some questions like that at the end for a discussion. Your message is clear and I can feel your passion to spread the love of Jesus in your words.