The Official Writing Challenge
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Sounds like a fun memory! You might want to better edit before submitting your entry. The tree slide sounds like it was a blast.
This is a charming story which I think pretty much everyone can relate to. It made me smile. Be careful to be consistent with your tense. You went from past to present to past again. I liked the ending. It's true that mothers have a special instinct. I liked how the verse you chose fit your message so well. Good job.