The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful history you have!
This is a nice memory. It is a goid thing to look back and see God at work in our lives even though we have no clue at the time. The dialog adds to the story but doesn't feel entirely authentic for a four-year-old girl. I'd like to see even more dialog and body language. I laughed at the scene you painted on the stage. I've seen many little ones dance and there's always a little ham. It made me smile. You have a nice clear message too.