The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/20
Thanks for sharing your family memory. Good work.
04/09/20
You've got good material and a good memory. A bit more thought put into the organization of the material could turn this into a very satisfying story.
Your title is tantalizing. Your memory is mesmerizing. And your piece was perfect. However, you made some glaring errors that could have been avoided had you set your story on the back burner for a few days and then re-read it. A poignant piece, nonetheless!
I still have several 45s from the 70s! What a fun memory. In my opinion, you could have stayed with only the musical memories, which would have made this a smoother read. Keep up the good work!
04/15/20
I enjoyed this!
Well done and on topic.
Blessings~