The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm blubbering. You got me.
Ah, this is a lovely story. Not sure why you capitalized every word of the Revelation passage and the lyrics of You Are My Sunshine. . .
To be sure, my eyes welled over as I read this piece. It is very evocative, and it speaks to the soul. You have a wonderful way with words. You, my friend, are a writer, indeed! Keep at it, and one day you shall bestow a book on the world. I just feel it.
Oh wow! Tears. I sure hope this places!
A wonderful story. Engaging, that touches the heart. Well done!
Oh my goodness!
This set off a myriad of emotions for me...chills, tears, smiles, and an inner surge of joy!

I love stories such as these, personal...compelling, and special. The kind that sticks to your heart and soul, and this one did for sure!

Right before my Mom passed away, my brother was sitting by my Mom's bedside, and he heard our dad's voice who had passed on years before my mom. He was calling my mom's name, "Marie" and she looked up and smiled. My brother knew my dad had come for my mom.

It is God's grace when He allows those left behind to hear and see the witness of His glory.

I am sure they are singing every day now. Young and happy and with the LORD!

Wow...I really rarely say things like this, because I don't want to "slight any other writer" --- but I pray this WINS hands down!


Thank you for sharing with u

My heartfelt congrats to you for this piece and recognition.
I truly loved this from start to end, it touched my heart and soul.

Thank you for sharing,