The Official Writing Challenge
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02/27/20
I don't read a lot of poetry and am not familiar with the various rhythms and formats used for verse, but I really enjoyed this piece. A very creative way to share the Gospel.
02/28/20
I like this. I'm not an expert, but I think it could have done without the last verse. Kind of changed it from a testimony to a sermon. Nevertheless, I like it.
02/28/20
Very Good! I loved it!
02/28/20
Loved it!
Beautifully written, and powerful message
Thank you
Blessings~
What a nice testimony!
03/04/20
I liked your poem. It flowed well and had a very nice rhythm. I'm not an expert on poetry, but the last verse did seem to change in focus-maybe staying focused on the changes in the "main character" would work? Just a suggestion-God bless and keep writing!
03/05/20
Loved your poem. Good job!
Keep writing.