The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/20
Great job with the topic, well done. The story touched my heart.

Blessings~
And I'm so grateful that God uses me wherever I'm planted!
02/24/20
Loved the uses of imagery and senses. Good descriptions of the circus scene.

Great message of hope, encouragement, and salvation.

Be careful of using redundant phrases like, "You see..."

Overall good entry.

Be blessed and encouraged.