The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
02/20/20
I enjoyed your entry, it was descriptive and told a story that held my interest.

Well done,
Blessings~
02/21/20
Enjoyed your entry.

Watch punctuation and spelling.

For easy reading, try spacing into more paragraphs.

Your story telling is good and captivating.

Keeping entering.

Blessings.
Fun story. It would have been easier to read had you made spaces between dialogue and paragraphs. But the story was fun.