The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/20
Great message!
That's a good reminder to remember God "sees the heart" and not the outward appearance, as we should too!

Good job,
Blessings~
Unfortunately, this behavior happens all the time.

Something I've learned about doing the challenges is that the topic word or phrase should be the main emphasis in your entry. One story I wrote was on the topic of "Yellow." I told a great story, but only alluded to a yellow rowboat. That was not what the judges want to see.

Keep up the good work, you wrote a good story.
Great message to this story.

I thought you had A wonderful flow to your story.

Although you mentioned tower, it wasn't central to your story.

Keep up the great work.
01/27/20
Great reminder that appearance does not necessarily show the heart.
Use the topic for the main point and not just adding in the word here and there.
The story line is good, though.