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01/24/20
Wow, what an honest to the core entry, powerful, truthful and strong in all aspects.

I'm glad that you "knocked that tower" down. Isn't God amazing that He never lets us down and will show us the way. When we open His book, He almost always will "quicken" a word to us. As evidenced by your particular story, that so many will relate to,

Thanks for your honesty, and for a great word.

Great job!

Blessings~
Wow! I would have never thought to make an analogy like that. Well done. Hope this places!
01/25/20
Really enjoyed this thought provoking article. Very transparent and real.
Good job!
I liked your honesty about strife you had in your marriage. It tied into the tower theme really well.

I may have used a different word for tower but it would make an excellent devotional

Thank you for sharing.
01/27/20
Nice story. I liked your concept of the 'tower' in the marriage. Great advice!
This is an excellent devotion. I liked how you started with a real-life experience that many can relate to. You definitely nailed the topic. I noticed you used the topic word at least four times. You don't need to use it for it to be on topic. Perhaps sub some other words for it sometimes like obstacle, or a phrase like the fight looming over us. I think your take on the topic was creative and fresh. The verse you used fit perfectly with the message. I don't know if you've ever submitted a devotion for FW daily devotions, but if you haven't, I think you should consider doing so. You've a gift for sure. Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 14 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.