The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/20
Excellent retelling of the familiar Biblical story.
Right on topic as well!

Blessings~
Oh that would have been an amazing thing to witness!
The opening sentence drew me in.

The transitions in your story were seamless.

Did a good job retelling of the Tower of Babel
01/27/20
Great storytelling and use of words.
I would recommend checking your sentence structure before submitting.
Good job!