The Official Writing Challenge
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01/09/20
A very direct take on the topic. There were some places where the dialogue could be tightened up; and there are a couple of inverted commas missing. But the message is strong - put good in, get good out.
01/10/20
Good on you for writing this story. I sat twiddling my thumbs after an hour trying and failing to construct a story around the topic. Some of your word pictures were lovely.
I understand how hard it can be to rid yourself of the after-affects of a bad or weird dream!