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Good story of hitting bottom. Reading this would have been easier had you spaced out the paragraphs, and separated the quotations. I would love to hear of what happens next with your MC.
12/13/19
I love the hope that your story left me feeling for the characters marriage. It left me wanting to see how things panned out. so when you finish the rest of the story double space between paragraphs to make for an easier read. Awesome job describing her emotions and the scenery around her. It helped to hold my interest in the totality of what was going on. Keep up the good work.
12/14/19
Beautiful, heart-wrenching story. You did a great job conveying the emotions of the main character.
12/14/19
I would like to know how this story turned out.
I liked how your emotions came through about your marriage difficulties.

Your analogies of the beach and your marriage journey made me feel for you.

Even though the children were sent to boarding homes, did that distance them from you per did they keep constant with them.

Good writing.

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