The Official Writing Challenge
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What a nice story! The beach is an amazing place and I'm sure it was wonderful seeing their reactions.
Beautiful story of persistence, compassion, and God's power and goodness.

Red Ink: Work on breaking some of your longer sentences up into smaller ones. Keep the longer sentences spaced out among the shorter ones. The first sentence would work great just stating you don't remember how you met the man. Then, in your next one, tell who is was.
Beautiful story of God's grace extended to meet the needs of others. How encouraging!
In the first sentence I think the word "meet" should be "met". Again; beautiful story. Keep up the good work.
An interesting and powerful story.