The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/19
Lots of information in your writing. I think if you separated the paragraphs and thoughts, the reader wouldn't run out of breath. Good writing, though.
11/21/19
A very good lesson here...
Most of us don't get "Hallmark Holidays." But I'm so grateful for what God has done all year long! This would have been more enjoyable to read had you put spaces between the paragraphs. Keep on writing.
11/23/19
Your reminder to consider the circumstances of others, knowing many have more needs that we, is a great reminder for this season.
(I had to learn about paragraph spaces in this format, too :) )
Good job on your entry.
11/25/19
On topic, and you make some good points in this piece. Keep writing.
11/29/19
Congratulations!