The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/19
I love poems!
11/21/19
Nice poem! I liked your lines about "home." The coldest, most unfriendly house I was ever in was a McMansion and the warmest was a tiny cabin.
I'm thankful every time my 9 year old car starts!
11/23/19
Poetry is a beautiful outlet for what's deep inside. You've done that very well with this beautiful poem. God Bless.
11/25/19
Some good reminders in this poem. The last two lines are my favorite. Keep writing.