The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/19
You make some great points here. Well thought out.
10/24/19
I believe God does give us the strength to forget when we petition Him for it.... And it's solid to think we should forgive AND let the past go.
I wished I could forget some terrible things I've done in my past! I know God forgives me.
10/26/19
Such a magnitude of truth here in this piece. Well done,
Blessings~
I enjoyed this. I think you did a great job of telling another side to that old adage. I tend to agree with you. Although your story is about tearing down a stereotype, I noticed in doing so you used other clichés (slate to be clean, dot "i"s, etc.) Instead, I might urge you to make these points using your original words instead. I think you've a natural talent and it will make your message clearer. You did a fine Jon of writing on topic and delivering a clear message.