The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/19
The last line me chuckle!

What a fun entry.
10/24/19
This was an enjoyable read. There were places where the rhythm flowed very well, and a few places where it felt awkward. Overall delightful.
10/25/19
I enjoyed reading this poem. I found it relatable and fun. I would like to see it broken into stanzas, but that could just be me. The ending made me smile. Keep writing.
This kind of reminded me of a Dr. Seuss style writing!
10/26/19
Oh this made my heart smile!
I truly enjoyed this from start to finish.
Well done,
Blessings~
This is great. You made me chuckle many times, yet still delivered a powerful message. Poetry is not my favorite genre, but this piece is one of my favorites this week. Awesome art!
10/31/19
Congratulations!
10/31/19
congrats!
Blessings~
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