The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/19
Wow...this was deep on many levels, gives one pause to reflect on so many things. Mama Jo was clearly needing touch, care, acceptance and love...However, Charity was the antithesis of her name.

I liked how you allowed us to see within her mind and conscience.

Well done,
Blessings~
I think Charity was misnamed and in the wrong profession!
10/21/19
A good reminder for us in the care giver role. I want to reflect Jesus.
Compelling story with a great beginning. You really grabbed my attention. The end was a bit sudden. But well done
Blessings