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10/17/19
I loved this piece and can totally relate!
10/18/19
You had me smiling, nodding my head, and laughing at once.

Truth be told, although we have noticeably aged on the outside, the Spirit is still intact and as beautiful as ever, as are you!

Lovely entertaining and great powerful message, I can see this scoring well with the judges.

Well done,
Blessings~
I can identify with this piece! My brain says I'm still young, but my body says no way
10/21/19
My husband was just saying today that he don't feel like an old man and I can certainly relate to that. I think our spirit will always be young.

Very good writing! Blessings
10/21/19
Yes, I can relate. And, I remember my mother saying the same thing. She didn’t feel old on the inside.
You had me laughing out loud. Loved this! Blessings
10/24/19
What a sweet ending in this piece. Congrats on your win. :)
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