The Official Writing Challenge
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Great message and right on target.
In the end we will be judged. I'm confused over your story. Where were you, and why were people being shot? Perhaps it an imaginary account, but I was unable to understand. I do, however, know tat we will have to give an account to God some day.
Wow - scary but possible. It rambled a bit here and there. One thing that would really make this story pop is if you included more of our senses. What were you smelling? What was the waiting room decorated like (or not!) What did the captors look like, sound like.