The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/19
Others may see it differently, but I think this could be two separate pieces - one focused on hospice and one focused on the garden. I bet you could develop each of them well. My favorite line is "Overwhelming doesn't mean impossible."
I liked the two examples, and yes, I have known people who survived hospice. I especially liked the line "Hope is not always tidy." So true!
09/18/19
Well done, and so many truths throughout this piece.
Blessings~
09/20/19
Congrats!
Blessings~