The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/19
This piece drew me in and held my attention. Good job of writing on topic. Keep writing.
Wow! Quite the story. Amazing how the 20 dollars was the running theme.
09/18/19
Great job with the topic!
Well done,
Blessings~
These are two great stories with nice messages. It's easy to feel overwhelmed. I liked how you used dialog in the first one, but with some tweaking like using contractions and shortening it up some (people speak in incomplete sentences), it would sound more authentic and put more punch into your story. You've a great foundation for two distinct stories here. The topic is well covered and they were easy to relate to. Keep writing. I'm eager to read more of your work!
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