The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/19
From the very first words (before I knew they were lyrics), I thought it would be nice to hear them set to music. There's a nice flow to these lyrics. Keep writing.
09/13/19
Uplifting and lovely sentiment and positive message.
Well done,
Blessings~
I would love to hear the music to this! I understand the lyrics, I felt the same way before last year's retirement. So glad God was there with me!
09/14/19
Very good and real. I think we of faith tend to say we are doing OK or fine when inside we are not.
Thank you for your honesty and being on target with the subject very good.
09/20/19
Congrats!
Blessings~
09/20/19
Definitely the start to a song! Nice.
I'm not very musical, but I could hear this as a song right away. It flows nicely and has a great message. Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 18 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.