The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! You made some very powerful points. Great job speaking a very hard truth.
08/29/19
Very insightful. My only suggestion is that it would have been super interesting had you popped inside the man's head and had some dialog between him and his ill buddies! Keep scribbling!
08/30/19
Yes, change is hard. You make some excellent points and sometimes it is hard to imagine that life can be better in our seemingly hopeless situations. But we have that Hope in Christ. Great writing.
09/02/19
Interesting perspective.

I agree with another poster. I think this perspective would have worked better if you had told us the story from the POV of the man.

This is a good reminder not to get "stuck in a rut."