The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/19
Excellent. And definitely a winner!
Excellent. You showed your message rather than describing it. That is a sign of good writing.
I agree- this should be a winner! Well done.
08/25/19
This should not be in the beginner/intermediate category. What a beautiful, heart-catching visual. I was there the whole time. Lovely. Definite winner. Stop and smell the roses.
08/28/19
A good reminder to “take time to smell the roses”. I liked getting the point across in conversation.
Wow! This brought tears to my eyes. I have a friend who might be facing blindness. This story touched my heart in ways I can't express. It's one of my all-time favorites. Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 14 overall. (the highest rankings can be found on the message boards).