The Official Writing Challenge
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I like how you compared good surprises you receive with the "not so good" and how you ended it with God ultimately being in control no matter what. That tied it up with a hopeful conclusion.
I would focus on using less "that" in your writing. Just passing what has helped me. I am no expert. I think you did a good job!
You had a lot of interesting and different stories here. I think it would be good to take one of them, such as the bad news insurance story, and really flesh it out into a story about how you learned to trust God.
Thanks for sharing this story with us. I enjoyed reading it.

I like the way you compared the good to the bad surprises.
I liked the contrasting of good and not so good surprises. I would encourage a little more proof reading. Keep writing.
Good attitudes go a long way to help smooth over unpleasant surprises.